Nice writing, and "hero" is quite a dashing description. But zero points. Remember to think carefully about the theme.
Quenching Hero
A stage script co-written by the Actors in a relay format, depicting a certain facet of the battle to hunt the Voracity from different points of view. After the public performance ends, the writer with the lowest box office earnings will be tasked with hunting down the Troupe Master and hounding her for manuscripts for the coming year.
Curtain rises. On one side of the stage, the spreading Dark Zone continuously tears apart the swarms of Voracity beasts rushing in from all sides. BLADE enters the stage from the opposite side, raising his sword and slowly pacing forward. The entrance poem begins.
NARRATOR: A foxian cleaves through the layered skies, A swordsman stands above the wise. Shoulder to shoulder with Dan the Sage, Hand in hand with General Jing. White blades ring like strings of steel, Pure is Yingxing's heart, unstained and real. Killing intent sets jade trees aflame, Cold light shatters silver vases like glass in flame. From the toad's jaws, a brother saved, Beneath the crow's nest, the Voracity was slain. A sword becomes a brush, divine signs unfold, A tempered frame, a blade of steel, behold a hero bold!
With these words, BLADE charges forth, and in an instant, steel and shadow blur as one. Curtain falls.
(Note: Where's the script? How many times have I said this!? Any style is fine, except poetry! Rewrite!)